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Username: [Wolfe In Chef's Clothing]
Plot: I awoke on September eleventh of 2001, to the sound of the Reveille and quickly got out of my cot, making it in a matter of seconds. I quickly changed into my uniform like everyone else in the barracks. We grabbed our rifles and stood at the foots of our beds as the commander came in. He announced to us that today, we were going into war. We flew overseas to Iraq where we quickly unloaded our supplies. Out in the feild, guns blasing, I was joined by a little bull dog. When I got a chance, I looked at his collar that told me he was to be called Trooper. As we ran through the town, narrowly dodging bullets, he assisted me by taking down sevral men that wished to ambush me. He fought by my side for the longest time. Thats when we saw the mine....




Username: [Raiyr]
Plot: A mother goes for a one week vacation down on the coast of the Indian Ocean. Upon returning, with souvenirs, gifts, and such for her daughter, she also discovers a large lizard in her luggage. Deciding that it would make another great gift, and pet for her daughter, the mother christens it with the name Leigh. But as the lizards starts to grow, the daughter realizes that the ‘abnormally large lizard’ is actually a komodo dragon!




Username:[Shatureel] i have read i book almost exactly like this plot, plus i don't see how the pet fits in really...    



Username: [nevan]
Plot: Nevan fell flat on her face, having fallen straight over a protruding rock in the path.
“Ouch…” She got up slowly, rubbing her forehead, where a painful lump had formed.
She turned sharply and flung her foot out at the small red piece of stone she had tripped on and kicked it. “Stupid rock.” This wasn’t a good idea. Not only did the rock turn out to be harder than Nevan’s foot, but something small and blue shot out from underneath it, causing Nevan to leap backwards. The small blue thing froze a few feet away from Nevan, though whether this had been caused by it spotting a human or seeing them jump several feet in the air was impossible to tell.
“Wha...What are you?” Nevan said. She lent down and poked the little creature gently. “A Skink?” it didn’t run away, just started at her lazily.
Carefully Nevan picked him up, and raised him to eye level. She could now see little stripes running down his back.
“You know, your quite cute.” She smiled and stroked him. The skink turned his head and for a moment Nevan was sure he meant to bite her, but instead, he licked her hand with a small blue tongue. Nevan couldn’t help but giggle. “Ahh, how sweet!” She lowered her hand down to the ground, expecting him to crawl off, however, he did not. He crawled up her arm and dangled there for a moment before dropping off, right into her pocket. “I cant take you home..” Nevan sighed, looking down at her pocket. The little skink popped its head out and started up at her with big orange eyes. Nevan was won over. “Ok..” she laughed. “I’ll call you…Smidge!” ‘Smidge’ seemed to nod and so Nevan started walking home, bruise on head and Smidge in pocket.




Username: [Pua] more in the form of a joke than a plot.




Username: [Firenze]
Plot: A girl owns a pet Zebra finch called Bob, now Bob is a very clever and mischievous Zebra finch. One day when the girl went to college for the day to do lots of studying before she broke up for the summer holidays, Bob managed to escape from his cage and the confinements of the girls parents house and into the big wide world. Bob flew across the English Channel to France where he met some cute pigeons but he didn't understand a bloody word of French so he migrated to the USA. Whilst in the USA he flew through Arizona and hit the desert. As he soared in the desert sky, a vulture spotted him and attacked him, Bob flew as fast as he could to escape the Vulture and in the end flew right smack damn into a 20ft tall cactus and got a load of spines up his arse, although they were painful he used them to scare off the vulture after a while he grew bored of the USA and flew to Canada where he met the girls bookworm buddy. Now the girls bookworm buddy recognized him instantly and caught him right away, then hopped on msn and told the girl when she came online. She told the boy to tell Bob to fly home and he would do so. So the boy did as she said. But Bob being the naughty Zebra Finch he is, flew down to the Galapagos to meet up with some of the finches that live down there, when he got there he met up with this other cute little Zebra finch but she didn't like him and knew he wasn't a wild Zebra Finch like she was and told him to go home. Heartbroken Bob did fly home to England to the girl. The girl gave Bob a scoulding when he got home and then gave him his favourite food of nuts and raisins.




Username: [BlindGuardian]
Plot:Dominique, an 18-year-old girl from Gevaudan, France, moves to an apartment in the city of Buenos Aires, desiring to run away from her family and the people of her small town who always despised her. She struggles to get used to te city and the new language, and after some time she realises there's a Himalayan cat following her almost anywhere she goes. Unable to get rid of it, she takes it home and calls it Cleopatra. She feels there's something odd about the animal, but can't figure out whan until, after a car accident whic leaves her in a comma for a few days, she realises she has the ability to transform into a wolf. Back home, Cleopatra reveals herself as Melissa, a 30-year-old woman who knows the power they both hold. After some moral struggles, Dominique learns to use her newly discovered gift to get away from daily situations, and finally decides to return home and take revenge on all those who mortified her in the past. Not willing to leave her alone, and afraid of what could be the outcome, Melissa goes back with her under the shape of Cleopatra.
Although Dominique's first idea of revenge looks a lot like a slaughter, Melissa helps her find about her past, and her ancestors, which include the one known as the Beast of Gevaudan. Realising killing people will not solve her problem, she gives up her plan, but stays at her natal town in hope she might still find a way to take vengeance withouth shedding blood.



Username: [RainCloud] most if this plot is not about the pet until the end. And even then it’s a small role.




Username:[~altopia~]
Plot:Some things just cant be explained...As Pia is about to find out.
On a particularly cold, grey evening, Pia is sitting at her piano, playing The enigma variations, trying to get her mind to wander anywhere but where she is... Tears run down her cheeks, like raindrops racing down the window, tears that try to flush away the sorrow of her reality. As she plays, shadows seem to dance to each note, rising and falling, they form shapes in the darkness. Pia blinks as the music takes a life on of its own, the form of a purple dragonic creature seems to float through her room and through her mind. But what is this 'Enigma' dancing in the darkness, playing like a purple becon against an otherwise grey world?
Pia, almost trance-like, lifts her fingers from the keys, and reaches out through the darkness, do her eyes decieve her? She's about to find out...




Username:[raffle ticket]
Plot: There was once a girl named Natasha who lived with her strict grandparents in their insanely religious shrine. it seemed that her only true joy in life was to write and draw with her beloved set of ink pens. she carried them with her all the time, and a big sketchbook. she was constantly mocked at school because she was made to wear a heavy traditional japanese preiestess robe and the many pens she carried with her made huge ink stains in her pockets that bled through the fabric. one day she couldn't take the pain anymore and ran away from school and hid under a bridge to sadly doodle with her pens. as she did, a big drop of ink flew onto the front of her robe, making an abnormally large black stain on her chest. she began to cry, not realizing that the blot, brought to life by her sad heart and lonely tears, was forming into a furry black-as-night rabbit coming right off her robe and into her arms. she instantly loves the rabbit and names it (what else?) Inkblot. she soon realizes that Inky is magic, and grants Natasha wishes according to what her heart says (when her mouth isn't moving). natasha's never been happier, and returns home with her new friend, making her life better and better. but things begin to spin out of control, and Inkblot's time with Natasha is running out...




User name:[Fre$h to Death] disqualified for cheating



User name:[Kaos101]
PLOT: A young man lives with his mother and father out in the middle of a big city. This city is also known by msot to be one of the most crime-infested cities in the country. Despite this, the boy and his parents lived relatively happy lives for most of his childhood. His father, being a relatively weak man, made the young man learn how to fight in order to protect himself and his family, taking as many fighting classes as he could fit into his schedule and still be able to go to school. Because of the way he was raied and the morality he was taught my his grandparents, he was always a nice guy. Then, on his sixteenth birthday, when he was running in a track meet at school, two cops came to him, telling him that his mother and father had been murdered by unknown perpatrators in the neighborhood. Emotionally scarred and left with nothing, he turns towards crime to keep himself alive. With his fighting experience, he makes a big name for himself in the streets, becoming infamous among crime leaders and the like. After several years and after his parents had become a distant memory, he met with the man who had murdered his parents, though when he frist met him, he didn't know it. the man was a vicious crime lord, one of the most sinister in the city, who respected the young man and invited him to pull jobs for him, offering excellent amounts of money. Only after the young man overhears a conversation between the man and his right hand does he hear about his parents. He then plots and kills the crime lord, ending a huge chain of robberies and small time pickpockets and muggings. The young man turned himself in, feeling the remorse of joining those who killed his parents, and gets out after seven years and lives the rest of his life as a cop, seeing that this same thing doesn't happen again.




User name:[Monster Master] a newt with a broken leg bit your nose while sweeping? Were you sweeping with your nose?




User name:[zoloftzantac]
PLOT: Lionfish don't breed in captivity. No one knows why, but as a result of this fact, every Lionfish that you ever see in captivity was originally born in the wild. That means that every pet Lionfish was kidnapped from the enormous freedom of the oceans and forced into small and overcrowded tanks as they wait to be sold to the highest bidders. This is the true story of one pet Lionfish's struggle.

Katciss was born in the warm tropical waters of the South Pacific Ocean. He had a good, happy life there until a man caught him in a huge net. He couldn't move so it was hard for him to breathe and he was very scared. The man stuffed him into a very tiny and very crowded fish tank full of icky water. Then the man sold him to another man, who put him in a "fancy" fish tank. All of the people who talked about the tank thought it was very fancy, but Katciss didn't like it at all. Katciss missed the big ocean and his family, he got very sad and just sat on the bottom of his tank all day and cried. His owner thought Katciss was boring and he didn't love him.

Then the staff at the giffie-pet pound rescued Katcis from the owner and they put him in a super nice and huge tank with many other happy and playful fish. The staff loved Katciss and made him feel better, but he still missed the Ocean and his family...

That was when I met Katciss, he told me his whole story and we became good friends. I adopted him and brought him to my beach house on Bora Bora, and then I told him I would always take care of him, but that he didn't need a tank anymore. He could live in the Ocean again, and he would be safe from fishermen as long as he stayed near by my house. He was so happy. He found a nice spot on the coral reef and invited some of his family to come there to live. Then we all lived happily ever after.


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2006-07-12 [zoloftzantac]: thanks, yep, that's where I got him from, and it is all true :p

2006-07-12 [Shatureel]: *laughing* Yea I believe you.

2006-07-12 [RainCloud]: [Kaos101] undeniable talent with which i am unfortunately very well aquainted, hence my comment

2006-07-12 [skullhead]: Wow lots of good plots O_o

2006-07-12 [zoloftzantac]: Come on now, lets not pick on anyone. The point isn't to write a perfect paper, it is to write and interesting story idea. If you have constructive suggestions then that might be okay, and in a forum or wiki I might give someone a hard time, but picking on someone's work when you are competing against them really isn't cool.

2006-07-12 [kittykittykitty]: Awwwwwwwwwwwww [zoloftzantac] I looove your story idea :D :D :D

2006-07-12 [zoloftzantac]: hooray! ^__^ thanks! you should come with me to Bora Bora next time so you can meet him ;)

2006-07-12 [BlindGuardian]: Booo!! It looks like a lamely happy version of "Finding Nemo"!!! :P

2006-07-12 [Kaos101]: I believe that comment falls under rude and unnessecary criticism

2006-07-12 [raffle ticket]: that WAS rather cold

2006-07-12 [BlindGuardian]: It was friendly teasing... I did like the story!

2006-07-12 [Big Brother]: i thought it was funny ^_^ if anything it makes me like zz's more.

2006-07-12 [BlindGuardian]: and also makes me wich I could go to Bora Bora

2006-07-12 [Big Brother]: not for me........

2006-07-12 [kittykittykitty]: It's not my kind of place to holiday, but I would go to Bora Bora if zoloft and his Lionfish were there :P

2006-07-12 [BlindGuardian]: Maybe he could also recue my sister's zebra fish. It wasn't moving last time I checked :/

2006-07-12 [zoloftzantac]: hahaha, I never saw Finding Nemo, is that what happens in that movie?

2006-07-12 [raffle ticket]: really? you've never seen it? jeez, i thought everyone from here to jupiter has seen it O.o

2006-07-12 [zoloftzantac]: It was a cartoon right? Yeah, it looked like a little kid movie to me so I skipped it, is it good or something?

2006-07-12 [raffle ticket]: i didn't really think it was so great. it was okay, but it was oversold

2006-07-12 [raffle ticket]: ps: no one stone me or anything because i didn't liek finding nemo! *flinches*

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